Plot:
A new family who moves into town, a
neighbour who seemingly is an ‘all-round nice guy’ and a family member who is
murdered.
Intense scene:
Ian breaks into his neighbour’s house. Kath is
the only one home.
These are the thriller conventions that will be
used in the scene: shadow, eerie music, ironic music choice, zoom in, tracking
shot and a vulnerable character.
1. Who do you introduce character-wise and why?
The scene begins with a black background
where dialogue is heard. A fade-in shows an extreme wide-shot of two adults
walking out of a house. The audience will identify them as parents because of
the dialogue, “We won’t be gone long honey,” and affectionate manner with
their daughter whose face the audience has not seen yet.
Next, the extreme wide shot focuses on the
daughter showing her closing the door. It is taken from the perspective of the
mentally-ill man’s eyes. The camera zooms in giving the audience a
glimpse of the daughter’s face. She appears to be an adult. She will appear to
be the vulnerable character because when the man breaks into their house the
audience will feel worried for her safety.
The mentally-ill man is shown last in the scene.
A tracking shot is used throughout to follow the man's movement. In this scene,
his costume is dark and baggy hiding his appearance. He acts suspiciously by
hiding behind a tree in front of his neighbour house and by carrying a bag
which the audience will find is filled with metal tools.
2. Where do you set your film scene, why?
The film is set in a small and quiet town it
gives the impression that it is isolated.
This scene occurs at night, the source of light
comes from street lights and the lights from inside the houses. The darkness
creates suspense and shadows in the background.
Inside the house, there will be a zoom-in shot of
a family photo in the hallway, of a collection of photos of Casey on the door
and of Casey’s certificate in university. These three will be briefly given
attention and are hints to the reasons why the man has broken into the house.
He is obsessed with Kate’s older sister and this is confirmed in the movie
through this scene where he breaks into her room and wanders around, smells her
stuff and peels off her certificate from the wall and takes it. Afterwards, as
he shines his flashlight in the dark it shines on Kath’s face who has suddenly
appeared. The setting of the house is ironic because a house is a place of
safety and love. Therefore, this will intensify the feeling of worry within the
audience.
3. What iconography and symbolism will you
include?
Contrapuntal music will be used to contrast the
visual elements and music of the scene. The music will be playful to reduce the
tension which has been created by the atmosphere of the night. It suggests that
Sam is unaware of the intruder and therefore reflects her state of mind.
Eerie music will first be used shortly at the
beginning of the scene where the man stalks Kath from the tree indicating
something is wrong. It is also used near the end of the scene. This will help
to create a suspenseful atmosphere.
Shadow will be used to show the duplicity of Ian
representing the two different sides he has: the ‘nice guy’ and the obsessive
mentally-ill side of himself which he doesn’t show anybody. The shadow displays
his ‘dark side’. It is linked with the dark, it will be used in the scene
to evoke the audience's fear of the unknown.
Storyboard
Research
Thriller Inspirations
Movie: Citizen Kane
· There is a good link between
music and visual
· Fade
transitions are used
· The theme of
dark colour
· Montage editing
Movie: The Dark Knight
· The opening
scene gets straight into the action- zipline up to the room
· Fast-paced
music (non-diegetic sound) to match with the story convention
· Props of guns
and masks which signify violence
· Dialogue sets
up the characters
AS Media: Excemption
· Absence of
dialogue is effectively used
· Close up shots
to show facial expression which acts as the 'spoken language'
· Jarring music
intensifies the stabbing scene
AS Media: The First Degree (film opening)
· Canted angle
to reflect the character's state of mind
· Title design
matches well with the story
· Interesting
choice of music
· The subject
goes out of focus
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ReplyDeleteOverall Score: 32/40
ReplyDeleteStoryboard:7/10
Brainstorm:8/10
Rationale: 17/20
- A great idea, using 'home' as a setting for creating a fear of invasion.
- you did well to think about the angles, lighting, characterisation of the cast
- as always, details will help boost your marks, but as for creativity and thought into conventions for a thriller, you have done well