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Homework Below is the research findings of five logos: Disney, Warner Bros, Columbia Pictures, Paramount and MGM. Disney ...
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What is the purpose of Opening Sequences? There are two purposes of opening sequences. The first is to set the scene by showing the viewer...
Hi Priscilla
ReplyDeleteOverall Score: 16/20
I really enjoyed the concept you worked with here. You chose a really clever storyline which kept the audience guessing until the twist in the middle where we see who the girl actually becomes in her second personality.
Your sound in the beginning obviously was slightly off and it seems like a piece of your footage was potentially missing.
Your jump cuts as a convention are effective as well as the shots you've used, particularly the passage shots.
Sound could have been more effective in finding music that went somewhere and increased tension instead of evenly staying at one pace from the start.
An establishing shot would also have been a great way of setting the scene so the viewer knows where the scene is taking place.
Credits are also needed at the end of your sequence even with the titles of the main roles/ actors in the beginning.
Definitely a noticeable improvement on your last project and it's clear you are continually grasping technical concepts in how to create elements of the thriller genre and psychological thriller, specifically.